Watch (First 25,000 words) by Robert J. Sawyer
Robert J. Sawyer's Watch drops us into a very plausible tomorrow. Matt works for the Eye Network, a government agency. His desk isn't in a field office; it's in his living room. His tools are a bank of monitors streaming live feeds from the cameras, microphones, and sensors embedded in people's devices. He's a Watcher, and his job is passive observation—spotting patterns that might indicate a crime before it happens. He's a cog in a massive, silent machine of prevention.
The Story
The story kicks off with Matt's routine. He watches dozens of lives, noting grocery lists, overheard arguments, and daily commutes. It's numbing work. Then, he's assigned to watch Caitlin Decter. On paper, she's unremarkable. But Matt notices small things—a missed call from a number that pinged a low-level alert weeks ago, a route home that subtly changes. The system's algorithms rate her risk as minimal, but Matt's gut screams otherwise. The first 25,000 words build this quiet tension masterfully. We're with Matt as he battles professional protocol, which demands he ignore his instincts, and a growing personal conviction that Caitlin is a target. The central mystery isn't a whodunit; it's a 'what-is-it?' and 'why-won't-the-system-see-it?'.
Why You Should Read It
Sawyer makes the tech feel invisible, which is its own kind of brilliance. The focus isn't on the shiny gadgets but on the human staring at them. Matt is a fantastic lens for this world—he's not a rebellious hacker, he's a company man who believes in the system. Watching that faith crack is compelling. You feel his isolation and his frustration. The book also brilliantly plays with modern anxiety. We all know we're being tracked; Watch asks what kind of person is on the other side of that data, and what they might miss when they're looking at a thousand lives at once.
Final Verdict
This opening is perfect for readers who love a slow-burn psychological thriller with a sci-fi edge. If you enjoyed the ethical dilemmas in shows like Black Mirror or the tense, observational style of novels like The Girl on the Train, you'll sink right into Matt's chair. It's a character-driven story first, a tech story second. The 25,000-word sample doesn't end on a cheap cliffhanger, but on a powerful moment of decision that left me absolutely needing the full book. Consider yourself warned: you'll start side-eyeing your own webcam.
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Melissa Williams
4 months agoVery helpful, thanks.